I am a Year 4 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed this haiku activity as I love to read poetry and I think haikus are a very fun form of poetry with their syllable rules and simplicity.
Your haiku is well written, you followed the 5, 7, 5 syllable rule perfectly and I think your theme is very fun. I also love the autumn season when all the leaves and you can rake them into a pile and jump in them.
I also like the image and colors you use as they really matched with the autumn theme.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
I would like to say thank you for your positive comment on my post. It will motivate me to do more post and thank you for your kind comment and have a good day. By Sadia
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Sadia,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed this haiku activity as I love to read poetry and I think haikus are a very fun form of poetry with their syllable rules and simplicity.
Your haiku is well written, you followed the 5, 7, 5 syllable rule perfectly and I think your theme is very fun. I also love the autumn season when all the leaves and you can rake them into a pile and jump in them.
I also like the image and colors you use as they really matched with the autumn theme.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
Kia ora Zana
ReplyDeleteI would like to say thank you for your positive comment on my post. It will motivate me to do more post and thank you for your kind comment and have a good day.
By Sadia