Monday 23 November 2020
Kiwi’s
At the zoo, we walked into a place that was very dark,quiet and it looked like a cave. Then I saw a kiwi, it was surrounded by man made things to make it feel like it was in its natural habitat. But it was hard to see the kiwi’s because they blend in with the environment. I wanted to see the kiwi’s because they are unique to NZ and, because just because they are birds they can’t fly! A kiwi is a bird with a long beak,long legs,and has brown feathers. Next time I go to the zoo I what to see the alligators. After the trip I felt happy because I got to see one of my second favorite animal, its a kiwi. During the trip I smelt nothing, it smelt normal.
Kia ora Sadia
ReplyDeleteThe way you described the kiwis home helped me to picture in my mind what it was like. That was especially powerful for me as I wasn't able to go on the zoo trip. You have really put a lot of thought into your recount of the trip to the zoo. I am really glad you got to see your second most favourite animal. The word camouflage is a very useful one, "blending into the environment" is exactly what it is. Thank you for sharing some fantastic information.
Thank you Raina.
DeleteMy mum helped me and thank you for our lovely comment.
Interesting Blog, Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteWow Sadia what a wonderful piece of writing. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I agree with Raina you have done a splendid job of helping me to visualise everything by drawing on your senses.
ReplyDeletePerhaps next time you could find a picture of one of the animals to add to your story.
hi sidda
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Deletegood job sadia!! this is a good post!!!
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hey sadia you set a good example of how you like kiwis
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