I am a Year 4 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Today for the Summer Learning Journey we were doing a collage of summer food. It was fun and hard I wolud do this again and I think you should try it to.
Great work on this activity. These are some great summer food choices. Watermelon is especially my favourite. It's a great time of year to have nice cool watermelon and juice in the hot sun.
I would like to say thank you for your positive comment on my post. It will motivate me to do more post, and my favorite is the ice cream. Have a good holiday. Sadia
Hi Sadia! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School, I am a participant of the Summer Learning Journey. Awesome work! I like the way that you added in lot's information on why you like particular foods.
In mine, I added lot's of traditional Japanese summer foods, since I am Japanese and a lot of the food I associate with is from my own culture. I added in kakigori! Or as most know it as shaved ice. It's really nice, it's like having an ice block! just smoother and softer. What kind of foods do you enjoy? Sweet or savoury?
Maybe to improve, you could try to change the colour of the text bubbles and maybe change the shape of the photos.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Sadia
ReplyDeleteGreat work on this activity. These are some great summer food choices. Watermelon is especially my favourite. It's a great time of year to have nice cool watermelon and juice in the hot sun.
Which one of these are your favourite?
See you later in the comments,
Daniel
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DeleteKia ora Daniel
DeleteI would like to say thank you for your positive comment on my post. It will motivate me to do more post, and my favorite is the ice cream. Have a good holiday.
Sadia
Hi Sadia! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School, I am a participant of the Summer Learning Journey. Awesome work! I like the way that you added in lot's information on why you like particular foods.
ReplyDeleteIn mine, I added lot's of traditional Japanese summer foods, since I am Japanese and a lot of the food I associate with is from my own culture. I added in kakigori! Or as most know it as shaved ice. It's really nice, it's like having an ice block! just smoother and softer. What kind of foods do you enjoy? Sweet or savoury?
Maybe to improve, you could try to change the colour of the text bubbles and maybe change the shape of the photos.
Excellent work!
Mia
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