I am a Year 4 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Today for the Summer Learning Journey we were doing a comic and here is my one. What I found fun was writing the comic and what I found hard was spelling the words.
Tino pai tō mahi! Good work with the comic activity :D
You said you found it hard spelling the words but clearly that hard work paid off as your writing is very clear, well done! I noticed one sentence though, “No my teeth fall of the boat”. Here you have included ‘fall’ rather than ‘fell’. Remember to think about what tense you are writing in. Past tense, present tense or future tense. Because the sentence is talking about something that has already happened, we need to use the past tense word ‘fell’ rather than ‘fall’. Also, ‘off’ rather than ‘of’. So the sentence should read, “No my teeth fell off the boat.”
Keep up the good work Sadia. Keep blogging and your writing will improve like crazy this summer!!!
I would like to say thank you for your positive comment on my post. It will motivate me to do more post and thank you for your kind comment and have a good day. By Sadia
Well done Sadia. I am so pleased you are joining in with the summer learning journey. This is one of my favourite short videos. It is so funny when he puts the teeth in after they have been in the fish's mouth. I look forward to seeing what other tasks you share Sadia. From Kylie
I would like to say thank you for your positive comment on my post. It will motivate me to do more post and thank you for your kind comment and have a good day. By Sadia
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Mōrena Sadia
ReplyDeleteTino pai tō mahi! Good work with the comic activity :D
You said you found it hard spelling the words but clearly that hard work paid off as your writing is very clear, well done! I noticed one sentence though, “No my teeth fall of the boat”. Here you have included ‘fall’ rather than ‘fell’. Remember to think about what tense you are writing in. Past tense, present tense or future tense. Because the sentence is talking about something that has already happened, we need to use the past tense word ‘fell’ rather than ‘fall’. Also, ‘off’ rather than ‘of’. So the sentence should read, “No my teeth fell off the boat.”
Keep up the good work Sadia. Keep blogging and your writing will improve like crazy this summer!!!
Mā te wā
Ben
Kia ora Benjamin
DeleteI would like to say thank you for your positive comment on my post. It will motivate me to do more post and thank you for your kind comment and have a good day.
By Sadia
Well done Sadia. I am so pleased you are joining in with the summer learning journey.
ReplyDeleteThis is one of my favourite short videos. It is so funny when he puts the teeth in after they have been in the fish's mouth. I look forward to seeing what other tasks you share Sadia. From Kylie
Kia ora Kylie
DeleteI would like to say thank you for your positive comment on my post. It will motivate me to do more post and thank you for your kind comment and have a good day.
By Sadia